For Study Purposes Only

The script below is formatted to highlight the key elements of a comic book script. Each part of the script is distinctly formatted so that the different elements are easy to identify and understand.

  • Panel Descriptions are underlined.
  • Character Names are written in bold.
  • Dialogue is written in italics.

The intention of this format is to show how a comic script is structured, with clear divisions between visual descriptions, character identification, and the actual spoken (or internal) dialogue.

PAGE ONE (FOUR PANELS)

Panel 1: JOB (from the bible) cleans up a burnt offering. Behind him stands KHONSHU in white, Egyptian style robe and green trim watches.

KHONSHU
Job is finishing his burnt offerings to God in case his own sons have sin.

Panel 2: Khonshu watches as Job leaves.

KHONSHU (V.O.)
I know this because I’m his guardian angel.

Panel 3: from Khonshu’s point of view he sees two gray hooded figure appear and follow

JOB
KHONSHU (V.O.) Who are they?

Panel 4: One of the grey hooded figures draws a sword. The other draws a dagger.

KHONSHU (V.O.)
Well, I guess they’re not allies.

Behind the Script

In this opening page of “Angel Protocol #1,” I wanted to introduce readers to the ancient biblical world but with a twist—through the eyes of Khonshu, the Egyptian god. By making Khonshu Job’s guardian angel, I explore the intersection of ancient mythology and biblical storytelling.

  • Panel 1: Job is a well-known biblical figure, and his devotion is illustrated here by him making burnt offerings for his sons’ potential sins. Khonshu is quietly watching over him, but his presence hints at something more divine and perhaps ominous.
  • Panel 3 and 4: The introduction of the hooded figures creates immediate tension. Who are these people following Job, and what do they want? By Panel 4, it’s clear they aren’t friendly.

I chose Khonshu as a guardian angel for Job because of his association with protection and judgment, making him a fascinating counterpart to Job’s faith and trials.

What Do You Think?

Question for readers:
Who do you think these hooded figures are, and what’s their intention? Drop your theories in the comments!